[Complete] [100k] [Post-Apocalyptic Fantasy] The Realm

Hey everyone, getting serious about this to the point where I’m about to start querying agents, so I’m hoping for feedback on the first four chapters of my work. If you want to read more that’s great too!

The Realm is low fantasy meets post-apocalypse - knights with machine guns. It follows two characters, Jack Walker, an American soldier stranded after the nuclear end of WWIII, and Jon, the Duke of York and Overlord of the northern regions.

I want to get these four chapters (about 28k words) really polished and grab the reader before I start sending it out so anything helps!

Thanks for your time! You can read the first four chapters here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bzVgXKe_pq-JhR3poNFwPHIH4fsl3gOe__wirTWtx2Y/edit?usp=sharing